Suddenly Awake
I watch you lean over the loft railing,a pale statue in the dark, tall listenerwho waits for the second coming of sound.Whatever startled you from sleep, shaped fear as this supple thinker, does...
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coolest line imolights the wick softlyletting awe heat the cold silence. yup. beautiful imagery- God playing the moon as a drum nice
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this read like a Maypole for me.every few lines the direction of attention curved agraceful arc out the window or down into thought pools ...but always reined in by the cord to the central pole.i'm...
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the poem has something of the same smooth unruffled appearance of those lladro statuettes, though its characters seem so removed from that world, far less predictable and certainly more active in...
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in your poems is stunning, very emotionally driven. like this poem.regardsedenfree E-bookNavel Orange
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Hiya Wendy. I enjoyed your poem and I love some of the unique phrasing and word usageand images in this piece: "waits for the second coming of sound" "shaped fear" (love that shaped fear) "letting awe...
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just beautiful, wendy!love it all and particulary the same things kerri pointed out.wow.
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ColleenThank you so much for your kind words regarding this poem. I am glad you liked it and took the time to stop by. That means alot!NeilI love your idea of the maypole. Yes, this poem rotates in...
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